seeking the unusual
Here’s a raw, unedited wedding scene. I was inspired by the Casa Batlló by Gaudí, which he designed to look like the story of Saint Jordi and the Dragon. I haven’t even read through it to check for mistakes yet, so please enjoy it for the unpolished thought process that it is. Cecelia stood on the back deck amidst a jumble … Read more
Rough Outline Aurelio stood next to Cecelia as she slept in her hammock, with a woven silk pillow that she had found surpisingly comfortable. She had fallen asleep nestled into the pillow, with the hammock pulled over her, pushing aside the thoughts of what she was actually sleeping in. Aurelio noted that her eyes were moving, knowing that she was having … Read more
Rough Outline Includes some comments from Josh in (CAPS) The rough pavement dragged on her toes as she shambled along. Even in her anger that had pushed away her betrothed and made her feel taller, she now felt pushed down into the earth by the disappointment of her father and the look of rejection in Paco’s eyes. Was he still betrothed? … Read more
I though it would be helpful to give you a plot summary since I’m feeding you random parts of the story. Comments about the plot are welcome too. Plot Summary Aurelio’s Story Character: Aurelio is of the mirror spider family, which has an abdomen that looks like a rainbow glitter ball. The spider has the ability to expand … Read more
Rough Outline Why She Ran: A Video Confession Ideas: Inprisoned by family Females not valued Much older sister couldn’t have children, but she was more powerful than mother, so she take Cecelia as her own child Older sister doesn’t love Cecelia, and abuses her Older sister threatens to sell Cecelia off for marriage, so Cecelia thinks the Prince will be cruel … Read more
Rough Outline Aurelio wasn’t much more than a speck when he caught the eye of Bonito. Bonito was on an exhibition, a trip provided by the king he was visiting. In the forest there were many wonders to see: the tall trees with fuzzy bark, the plants growing out of the sides of those trees, flowers of every size and … Read more